Daylight Robbery First draft opening scene
by John Moore
Logline
(The first draft of an opening scene to a teleplay I'm writing. PLEASE give feedback.) An unusual crime is taking place and it's not guarenteed to succeed.
Type: teleplay
Genre: Comedy,Crime
Synopsis
An unusual crime is taking place and it's not guarenteed to succeed. Sam is playing a pivotal role in what could be the biggest crime he has ever taken part in.
(Opening scene to a teleplay I'm writing. Please please please give feedback. I'll happily return the favour! Thanks!)
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