My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
So chuffed to find your work on here - I recall reviewing many of your pieces on YWO - always been a big fan. Are you looking for feedback on the whole thing?
Pelham is a priceless creation so I'd readily volunteer for more.
All the very best, JJ
michaelvank