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  • abibain

  • 2010-10-07 12:06:59
  • *Isabellina - my apologies.
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  • abibain

  • 2010-10-07 12:06:19
  • Hi Isabella, I was thinking along those lines as I was posting it - I haven't revisted this piece since I wrote it for university, probably should! :)
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  • isabellina

  • 2010-10-07 11:38:35
  • Hi I think you got the dreary feel of being out of work well enough - but maybe some dialogue, to build the characters up a bit. also what does she realise at the end when she looks at the paper and the calendar?