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Beauty And The Geek (30 Second Film Script)

by mystergeneral

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Another script that exceeds the 30 sec margin I'm afraid . You need to cut it down because lengthy dialogues cost seconds and by the time he walks over to her you have already lost 4 or 5 of them. Just cut the amount of word usage and I THINK YOU WOULD BE RIGHT ON THE BALL.

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