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Beauty And The Geek (30 Second Film Script)

by mystergeneral

Good concept, easy read.
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Yeah, it's a little long, it probably will play out around a minute or two. I really didn't find it a surprise, maybe because the whole turn geeky girl into hot girl (basically put a hot girl in pony tail, ugly dress, and give her glasses) is so overdone (Which I gather you are poking fun at) and good concept, but while humorous, it feels like it lacks something. Maybe it's because it still feels to similar to She's all That, or just I'm not all here today and am missing something - that's happens from time to time :) I am glad though you didn't go the way of the cliche of the ending being the girl betting with her friends about him - that's would have been bad.

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