Conversations

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  • Aliyah Keshani

  • 2012-11-29 14:26:20
  • Hello! Thank you for following me, Nathan21 :) Which of your pieces do you suggest I read first? All the best, Aliyah.
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  • Nathan Braund

  • 2012-06-26 15:01:54
  • Hi, hope all’s well. Just to let you know my novel, ‘The Broken Boots Guide to Astlavonia’ has just been published. It’s a black comedy about a debt-ridden divorcee who is sent to Astlavonia, a former soviet state, to write its first ever guidebook but discovers all disputes are settled with a knife. If you’d like to read the first chapter and find out more, please visit www.nathanbraund.com. Please help an unknown writer by telling your friends. Thanks very much. Nathan astlavonia@yahoo.com
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  • michaelvank

  • 2012-03-03 23:34:24
  • My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck. It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/ Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
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  • Sarah G

  • 2011-05-21 20:16:39
  • Thanks for the review, I really appreciate your feedback x
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  • liam197199

  • 2010-10-21 16:17:00
  • Haha I knew it! I knew I shouldn't have told you :P It ruins it for everyone. Yeah I'd say the thing about your writing style was the big bulks of action which kinda slowed down the reading. I heard somewhere that action shouldn't be more than 4 lines max. And yeah it works better when it's short fast lines, even if you just split the big bulk into small pieces it'll flow better! : )