Share your story

Here Today...

by Nik Grantham

Logline

When the universe ends, what's there left to do?

Type: Short

Genre: Comedy, Sci-Fi / Fantasy, Psychological,

Synopsis

Flatmates Frank and Edgar suddenly find themselves in a seemingly infinite white void, with no explanation of what's just happened. They then try to figure out where they are and what's happened to the rest of the universe.

Conversations

please log on to leave a comment!

  • Avatar Image

    • Mark McKay

    • 2010-11-01 20:49:51
    • Loved the script. I thought the exchanges between the pair were very funny. Favourite line? "There can be only one". Brilliant. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but I guess that's just housekeeping, and the story works just fine.
  • Avatar Image

    • Danielle Spillett

    • 2010-11-01 10:27:11
    • haha, this is really clever! I like it! One thing I would say aboutthe writing style though, is usually just put the character's name in capitals when they first appear rather than every time. Just something we've got taught :) i really like the banter between the characters though :) made me laugh!! xxx
  • Avatar Image

    • liam197199

    • 2010-10-31 07:48:51
    • Zach Galifianakis eat your (sandwich) heart out!

Click to load more

Read

6 reads

Share / Email


13 Followers

Other Reads

Other Reads ยป