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Great script!
It has a great concept and the dialogue flows nicely. You can quite easily imagine them in this white void with only each other...and a sandwich.I think what's also attractive about the script is it could be quite easily made.If I was going to make a comment it would be that you can add more description into it during your action but being in a white void I can see how this would be hard.Overall though very funny, very clever and very charming. good work :)
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