Because Today We're Remembering Grass
Pretty striking, lots of emotion
I think this is a good start, the emotion is there and it's pretty raw and powerful. I like the imagery with the iPod and the kids' room, and the description of the scene and the driver screaming. I think it could be a little more fleshed out though, perhaps a little more description before the emotional impact so it doesn't feel rushed. Interesting read!
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