Thanks Adestra for your observation on "Voices of the Stygian Tribes. I agree that the plot is complex. Reason; the plot is dealing with 4/5 facets of society tied in the questions and answers; accounts, justice and restorative justice. The work is un-finished and is open to suggestions and criticisms. Please feel free to read the entire pages for a better clarification, Regards!
Thanks for your comments omnicurve/koala. I'm not very good with poetry - but I'm sure if I took a class I'd get the hang of it. I do paint though (although, again not particularly talented - just enjoy it). Why do you ask? Is there any particular piece of work that you are scouting for comments on? Thanks again - appreciate the feedback!