First Contact

HI Oryx, Great descriptions and attention to detail.It's the kind of writing that makes the reader pause and go over a previous paragraph again just to make sure he's milked all the portent and meanings out of it. It 's clear you have put a lot of thought into each line.Both of your characters were drawn well and I felt the creatures left behind would soon develop their righteous anger into a rage of rebellion and revenge. Well written.