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Hora

by oscilious

nice writing
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This is a nice well-written piece. Not particularly original, but then you could always build an startlingly original, larger story around it. The only criticism I have is that the logline "Sometimes faking an orgasm means so much more..." is a little misleading. I expected a completely different story on reading the logline, whereas the description in the synopsis is spot on.

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