Hora

That will teach me to read other reviews before reading the work itself! I was expecting not to enjoy this. I thought this was well-written, tender, and an interesting take on the seamy side of life. I warmed to Jason which was completely at odds to my feelings towards drug dealers - so you succeeded in showing that nothing is black and white. I liked the part where he was imitating Davor. Technical points - DAVOR'S RESTAURANT became ALFRED'S???? I would drop the CONTINUEDS - not necessary To take a sit - strange phrase. That para needs serious editing.