paperbackwriter
I enjoy writing feature films as well as short films which I try to either produce or get involved in their production in other capacities. I love movies especially Chinese cinema and 1940/50's British/US cinema. In the future I would like to write a novel but I'm quite busy at the moment with the film writing....so that will have to keep for now.
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plainview
- 2010-08-26 15:58:40
- Dear Paperback, Oh what a surprise......I saw your 'review' of Yield earlier and thought to myself - "I bet this person has not posted any projects of their own on the website". To my amazement (sarcasm), I was correct. Do you understand the concept of giving feedback or reviewing other people's work? All your comments say is that you don't understand the story, or you don't understand the character, or you don't understand who is in a photograph. Do you realise when you read something that you might have to use a little imagination? You haven't reviewed the screenplay at all. You say that - "I read your screenplay and liked your descriptive introduction of your story, you set the scene well visually.", and yet you rate the writing style as weak? Very odd. You also say "I don't get who the people in the picture and their relationship to her is not explained". Why does it need to be? Again, it needs a little imagination and for you to invest yourself in the story a little. That's a silly idea though. All you have done is give a very bland paragraph of words that don't make any real sense, or offer anything in the way of feedback. If my writing is weak, please give me some tips on how to improve. That's what we are all here for isn't it? There I go again, another silly notion that your review is anything other than an obvious attempt to manipulate the ridiculous ratings system on behalf of others. Isn't it strange that you are the only person who is unable to comprehend this story? There was one other person who posted a similar review a couple of days ago. That member's review was removed when it was discovered it was sent from a fake account. Odd that this is posted two days later. I wait on the edge of my seat for you to post some work of your own, that I can learn from(sarcasm).
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John Doby
- 2010-06-06 20:17:55
- Hey, check out my appearance on The Tonight Show, pitching my screenplay Sherlock Homie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pir59tzRZQw
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John Doby
- 2010-05-23 16:37:34
- Hey, thanks for the friend add. Please check out one of my scripts. I look forward to reading your review. Thanks in advance. Peace, John
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