A Handful Of Sky

excellent

by wizzy

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It was really good! And the way I can tell is half way through I forgot I was reading and just immersed myself in your story. So great job! The idea is not completely original, but still good. The characters are great. I love the turn of the Chrissie character from childish girl to killer with a knife; that was the best part.

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  • Perdita Stott

  • 2011-12-05 13:44:24
  • Hi, Thank you for such a wonderful, positive review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read it and your comments are very encouraging so thank you : ) Perdita