Paralysed

Hi Persianpen, Has anyone else reviewed your book? I'm not sure how to read other people's reviews. Anyway, I liked it right away, which is very unusual for me! You write with a strong clear voice. Just a couple of things struck me that you might find helpful if you're thinking of submitting it to agents etc. 1. Don't justify the text (on the right-hand-side). Agents don't like this, as it makes it harder to read. 2. You need page numbers. 3. It's important that the book is not too autobiographical. Again, agents don't like autobios masquerading as fiction. I filled in the stars above, although I've really not much idea about characterization, writing style etc yet. I only read 3-4 pages, but I spotted a mistake on page 3: they're should be their. If you want me to, I'll read it all and so a proper job for you. Let me know.