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Phil Thomas
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Former journalist and now PR, copywriter and part-time fiction writer. I live in North Wales with my partner and border collie.

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    • michaelvank

    • 2012-03-03 23:35:43
    • My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck. It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/ Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
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    • JammyJim

    • 2010-09-21 11:44:06
    • Hi Phil, thanks for the add. Look forward to reading your stuff, hope you have the time to give mine a go too. Cheers, J.
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    • Leah2010

    • 2010-09-15 12:20:40
    • Good to meet you, and snap - looks like we have similar backgrounds! Although, I live with my partner, and a small black cat that looks like a panther, and claws like one too.
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    • Phil Thomas

    • 2010-09-12 09:17:49
    • Hi Filmstar This might be more personal opinion than anything. Repeated use of "cop c**t" pages 5 and 6 began to grate with me. I note on page 6 you make it a proper noun with capitals. We end up with "cop c**t c**k" twice which is a mouthful (ahem) and feels like it's trying too hard (ahem again) to be funny. Just a feeling when I was reading it that maybe it's a bit too much. Like I say, maybe more personal choice than anything.

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