Hey, thanks for the look. If you can't get past page five. You really shouldn't review it because actually you haven't read it. As far as CAMERA DIRECTION, I have two optioned screenplays. And I am directing another. So I don't mind if put those in there. The blank pages at the bottom are because You should never have a SCENE HEADING with only one action line or less then two dialogue at the bottom of the page. Emily is beautiful. Emily (the actress most beware of her beauty from the get go. It's what the guys love is based upon but you didn't get that far. When writing scripts I see a lot of people forget its is a page of direction for EVERYONE. This was orginally an stage play. And Capitalization is in the correct form but when transfering it to my Program it freaked out on me. And Since I will NOT let any one but me direction this film. I was ok with the mistakes. And as far as HOUSE OF EMILY, Not really sure. But you should never write action or description in complete sentences. The reader wants plenty of white on the page. It just so happens this was also a musical and I had to drop a few things I wish I hadn't. But seriously. If you can't read the entire script. Your opinions means little to me. Have a great day.