My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
Hello redjamyellowjam, many thanks for your thoughtful and considered review. I will definitely ponder your suggestions which are constructive as good feedback should be. I've found that on his circalit site, reading through reviews is as revealing as reading the works. It's very hit and miss. Some people seem unable to give constructive feedback and just blurt out a subjective response. I'm slowly trying to gather a select band of friends who are as able to criticise constructively as they are able to write - so many thanks for this!
Hello redjamyellowjam, I've written a 6-page comedy screenplay called Be Prepared and notice you are an avid project reader. If you have a few spare moments, I'd value a bit of feedback from you.
All the best