Good concept, well executed
I really like the concept behind this, and the dialogue flows well between the characters without feeling to contrived.
I think some people may find it hard to believe the Aaron character, however there may be an element of him playing along at first as he is weary of not contradicting a person in a wheel chair (which would play on the theme of the script) If this feeling could be worked into the script and then the event of the other wheel chair user joining in on the joke is the catalyst for him actually believing Martin.
Good natural dialogue and interesting characters, set up in an original concept.
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