The names for the teens were out there. Even if you didn't convey personality. They already had it. But you did a great job with attitudes and speach patterns for those teens. The Dialogue was nice and flowing. I am curious who is the cat that pays for this crazy doctor. The concept was awesome. Scare the hell out of them. If they really want to die they wouldn't try so hard to live. It was easy to read and enjoyable. I liked it a lot. I found it entertaining.
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