Thank-you for your feedback. The cut to's being on the right was an error that happened when I was transferring the script to PDF format, which is something I've now fixed on the original version but not on this site.
Seperating the name of person's being addressed by a comma isn't something I've heard before, or even seen deliberately practised in the number of scripts I've read over the years so I'll be sure to do that for future reference.
Jason Anderson wakes from a coma after his attempted murder. As outside forces come into play his friend & family struggle with his awakening. ... more
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