No Place I'd Rather Be

I like it. Nice to read something, well, nice! I like the concept, the idea. I got the sense of place from the directions. It would make me happy if I saw this on YouTube.

I think you could punch up the characters a bit more though. I'm not saying turn it into Dr Zhivago or anything, I love it's brevity. But they are a bit generic girl and girl.

Then again, maybe that works in it's favour, I'm not sure. Good job though