Nicola

I read this short film and though I think it has alot of potential, when I was finished reading I was left a little confused, and I wasn't sure what the film was actually about. I think it is an interesting idea - a woman on a beach wading into the water, nobody knowing why, and people coming to her rescue, but I feel like as an audience we are left unsatisfied as there is no real resolution to or explanation of the situation. I wanted to be assured that the writer new exactly what the situation was - even if they weren't going to reveal it all to us as an audience. Maybe in the next revision it would be a good idea to make the characters a little more rounded and really think about what each scene is telling the audience, so that the story and the themes within, become much clearer.