Nicola

Dear Sarah, I thought that the concept is very interesting and the opening of the woman walking into the sea was very evocative and intriguing, but ultimately I wasn't sure what this was supposed to mean - if anything is supposed to mean anything. The newspaper clipping and the discovery of the identity wasn't (I thought) handled with sufficient clarity, and the scenes weren't clearly broken down from a film making style point of view - I mean each location should have a clear header and that should really change for a distance shot of the beach and the close up shot in the action, then the sequence in the water, then the pub etc. As I said, fascinating concept but needs a bit more breaking down and explaining. Yours sincerely Amedee