This is going to be one of my shortest reviews.
I liked this it was great.
Great character, sound dialogue, concept decent but not quite there for me, perfectly written.
I think my issue with the concept is one of genre. What genre is this meant to be? It's not surreal to the point of being some sort of post-modern art, it's not hilarious comedy, it's close to drama but then has this magic shark in it. Basically, it's a well written piece but it didn't rock my world.
Sorry if that last paragraph sounded all negative, but the merits of this piece can be summed up with the word 'great' and the thing I didn't like about it was a bit more nebulous and hard to pin down.
Thanks for the feedback.
I know what you mean about the genre - I only really stumbled over this when I uploaded the project and it asked me to define the genre. One for the pre-publish checklist next time.
Thanks for taking the time to read it.