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Shark

by Scriptpunk

A great little story
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It's a great little story that would make a really good short film. The concept is simple yet effective. The reality of the Mother's debts forcing her to do things she'd rather not do, contrasted by the imagination of a young boy, whose imagination elevates the story into the surreal.

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    • Scriptpunk

    • 2012-01-11 21:46:42
    • : ) Thanks - appreciate the feedback

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