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Limited By My Horizon

by Shaili Sutaria

made me cry,this one did.
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i loved this espacilly between the son and mother,wait was it the wife? its so nice!!!!!!! but should not be taken by STAR PLUS,THEY WILL MAKE IT RUBBISH AND THATS WHAT WE DONT WANT. A OVERALL BRILLIANT EFFORT!! i loved it! its very good,the character was very good!!! dialogue is brilliant,wait is there dialogue? the concept is very nice,a sad story,writing style is brilliant!!!!! it should be turned into a screenplay=film=fame for you!

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