Limited By My Horizon
The star scale doesn't really suit short stories, but this piece is very emotional and raw and could conceivably be a short but I like it as a short story because we can read the inner dialog and voice over tends to be frowned on as overdone.
Clean moving writing. I'm a big fan of short films and I screen those for a film festival so I look forward to reading those when you post some.
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