This Emptiness Inside Me

What I liked about this piece is that I felt it was from the heart. I could imagine you sitting at a desk pen and paper and furiously spilling your heart out. I liked the rawness of it. ‘What if I take the next step and I am successful. What If I achieve my dreams and become the person I wanted to be? What if I am still not satisfied?’ I thought that part drove the story home for me.