Tim falls in love with his Doctor and comes up with a desperate plan to get to know her.
Short and hopefully funny film script about a loser who falls in love with his Doctor. I would love to get some feedback, especially on the ending. EDIT (13th August) Thanks to the fantastic feedback I have received on this site I have made a small change to the ending, tidied up some of the dialogue and I think it holds together better. Although I may have overdone it on the Fiat Punto jokes! :D EDIT (18th August) After more great feedback, I've changed the ending again! It's darker (which I'm not sure I like) but previous endings seemed to whimper out, so at least this one might be more memorable. So thank you everyone!
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