It Hurts When I Do This

A WKD side?

by MattWeekes

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I thought this short flowed very well, and the dialogue was funny enough to keep it interesting. However, I felt that the concept overall was a bit tired and felt like an extended WKD advert, if you've seen them you may know what I mean. Still, it was an enjoyable read nonetheless. Good job.

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  • shoepie

  • 2012-05-11 22:59:43
  • Thanks for the review, and oh dear, I hate those adverts! I'm glad you found it funny, I'm more of a sketch writer so longer stories and plot are new to me.