A Message from History

Lovely stuff

by Paul Gilmour

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A simple, clever idea really well done - nice work.

 

I'd maybe take out the link at the very start to the text message sound, as it signposts the punchline uneccessarily. Other than that, it made me laugh, so job done.

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  • spenny

  • 2012-05-01 12:20:16
  • Thank you very much Paul Much appreciated. Good point on the sound thing-- I might be over egging it.