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  • rvittozzi

  • 2010-11-08 18:29:04
  • Good screenplay. Check out mine and review/comment it if you get the chance
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  • Bryonli

  • 2010-11-08 18:01:13
  • Not keen on the title and there's a your that should be a you're. Short and sweet though - pacey, gets to the point and works in the way you intended it to. Make it?