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Making Changes

by Dawn Chapman

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A young couple battle their inner demons trying to save their volatile and dangerous marriage.

Type: Short

Genre: Drama,

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    • tonysmith4737

    • 2013-01-04 10:19:24
    • I kind of thought I was maybe a little over critical... I didn't mean to be so abrupt... Sorry 'bout that
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    • tonysmith4737

    • 2012-12-27 11:40:13
    • Good pace to this... I didn't find the characters especially believable, though I appreciate that it's hard to get all of this story in to 10 pages. The dialogue work is pretty solid, but needs trimming down; Not everything has to be explained to the letter.... Good effort.
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    • markweir

    • 2011-03-29 21:48:26
    • Nicely done story. Really enjoyed the characters and how smooth the writing was. Look forward to reading more.
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    • Sarah G

    • 2011-03-12 17:26:53
    • Great dialogue and interesting storyline, look forward to reading more.

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