This would make a great romcom short
Thoughts on Muesli :
I really enjoyed reading this 6 page script. It was very funny in places. Most of the comedy derived from May's frustration and Pete’s excuses and awkwardness of the situation. I particularly like your characterisation of May and her unrequited love.
The script is formatted well and your action paragraphs work with the characterisations. Just enough dialog, not too much.
The short felt it had a complete beginning middle and end, not easy to do in a short.
This would make a great Romcom short film.
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