This is fun and quirky. The main character is lovable - which I think is always a good thing. Even though dialogue heavy, it's visual too - I think th ... Read More
Most scripts start with FADE IN. Left.
I have to say this now because there are far too many ‘camera angles and pov’ in here, are ... Read More
This is so you, David. Where do you get these crazy ideas?
I really enjoyed it, as I enjoy all your stories. I certainly had a little titter here a ... Read More
I thought at first this wouldn't be that good. But then around page 5 or so I realized I couldn't take my eyes from it. There was a little too much ta ... Read More