Future Roy (Short)
This is fun and quirky. The main character is lovable - which I think is always a good thing. Even though dialogue heavy, it's visual too - I think this would work as a radio play. Have you thought of sending it to BBC Radio 4?
The only thing I had issue with was that Jo appeared unemotionally involved to say that her Grandmother had received one of Roy's letters. She appeared to be a news reporter - along with film crew - might she be better if she was indeed this and had caught wind of these letters in the neighbour hood and so is investigating? Or is she actually that and I just didn't pick that up?
Enjoyable. Thank you.
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