The Businessman

There are some funny scripts entered in the short competition, but for me this is the most amusing I have read. Yes, there are issues with length, you can cut out the 'angle down to feet' part, you can simply start with the character pacing the room while his secretary types what he is saying, and launch straight into the dialogue, which should get it around the 30 second mark. But I enjoyed it, you get a great sense of what the character is truly like, and that's hard enough to get across in any script, let alone a 30 second one.