Thank god for this entry because I read a 30 second script before this one that was SO crap that I was afraid to comment or do anything on it, lol.
This was a great laugh and a great pick-me-up tale. My favourite kind of gags start with a misconception of the circumstances therein, and end with a very, very amusing revelation of truth.
Dialogue has to be 5 out of 5 because it all built up the ending brilliantly.
Concept, done before, but the point is: if you do it again - do it better! and you did.
Writing style, well that generally ties in with the bulk of the script which is mostly Dialogue, so no negatives here.
The character: well i wouldn't have laughed if i didn't think that the businessman could pull off the scene.
Thank you for cheering me up :-) lol
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