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Out With The New (Short)

by tgreg99

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After being downsized and forced into early retirement, Larry has to deal with handing over his duties to a younger employee ...

Type: Short

Genre: Comedy, Drama,

Synopsis

Another early short I wrote, in fact it's the first short I ever wrote.

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    • Dreambearer

    • 2010-05-12 15:28:28
    • Very well done. Your first, is it? You set the bar pretty high!
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    • cmhall

    • 2010-04-23 13:19:46
    • The pace of the story seems just right to me, and I like the cold blooded but casual tone; no big confrontations just cause and effect.
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    • ajrscreenworks

    • 2010-03-18 20:33:04
    • tgreg, A little heavy on the wrylies but crisp otherwise, and a great ending - nice job. Anthony
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    • carlj

    • 2010-03-18 18:10:50
    • Awesome short Looksl ike it could be adapted for a feature.

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