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Memory Loss

by thefifthape

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When Zach wakes up with a huge hangover and no recollection of the night before, a strange business card might hold the answer to his memory loss.

Type: Short

Genre: Mystery, Sci-Fi / Fantasy,

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Zach wakes up with a huge hangover and no recollection of the night before. When he finds an ornate business card in his room it instructs him to attend a meeting that afternoon. When Zach enters the meeting room he is confronted with 3 strangers - None of whom remember anything about last night. It is only when Angela enters the room that the truth is slowly revealed. A truth that Zach isn't going to like. Not one bit.

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    • mattman2900

    • 2010-08-28 04:31:09
    • Hi, Just read your short "Memory Loss" very well written. I just reviewed it and couldn't find really much of anything to critique. Though one sentence confused me a little, which I explain in the review, hopefully without giving anything away. Once I read one line in the opening page or two I knew exactly what was going on, but it still kept my interest and was an easy read. I think you may want to check out my short "Twist of Fate" another great ending if do say so myself. Anyway good work man. Cheers!

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