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Memory Loss

by thefifthape

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I enjoyed it, and didn't really see the ending as a twist as some people might if they didn't catch all the clues, but maybe because this is my genre I already knew what was going on and what was going to happen. Though at the beginning with beer bottles not sure that would be 'allowed' in that sense, but I think they were being used as a a bit of decoy/double meaning, so it actually might work. Good work.

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