Reviews
I would have punctuated the opening line like this: -
‘Who are these people and why would they do this?’ Penny thought.
In your next sentence ...
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I thought the story was interesting. I liked the descriptions of her trying to get free and the dialogue between the kidnappers, the evocation of the ...
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It’s written in a somewhat pedestrian style, with rather too many mentions of the character by name, when a few uses of the word ‘She” or some o ...
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