Loved it. Beautifully written. The contents of the letter slowly dawned on me making it all the more poignant.The scene with the father and son was es ... Read More
My name is Adam and I like reading so this short story was really good and cool because I could read it. The characters were really good. I liked Ben, ... Read More
The description in this story is good and the characters are fine. There's plenty of emotion.
That being said, I'm not sure this story really is a st ... Read More
As one first throws themselves into the story one is confronted by the familiar motif of the wasteland- a place devoid of sustenance, pervaded with a ... Read More
This was a beautifully written piece; the language in the first few paragraphs especially was highly gripping and intense whilst not being convoluted ... Read More
When I finally realized what this was about, I had a constant lump in my throat and had to go back and re-read with the new understanding. Something ... Read More