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THE BUTLER (Second Draft)

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It takes skills to survive this butler's routine

Type: Short

Synopsis

Two men live together. Boris is Danny’s butler; but these roles switch when the butler tries to kill the master. In spite of this, Danny endures this routine with a smile on his face. After all, Boris saved his life, once.

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- rvittozzi
- 2010-11-07 20:03:32
- great screenplay if you can check out my work.
- Teresa Hamilton
- 2010-11-06 15:45:12
- Well done, it's reading much better now. You've tightened it up a treat.
- turina
- 2010-11-06 04:34:20
- Again, this is a 5 pages script + title page. Thank you to everybody for the reviews, and a special thank to Wayne, a 'God sent' teacher!!
- Sam Boseley
- 2010-11-05 05:41:17
- On Page 4 - Theres a small typo. you wrote rests albows on his knees, when its elbows. Delete this post when you get it.
- turina
- 2010-11-05 04:49:16
- Well, I hope you do not mind. This is the second draft, and as such is the best shot I have at this -since I have not the time to work on the project for now.