Conversations

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  • rvittozzi

  • 2010-11-07 20:03:32
  • great screenplay if you can check out my work.
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  • Teresa Hamilton

  • 2010-11-06 15:45:12
  • Well done, it's reading much better now. You've tightened it up a treat.
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  • turina

  • 2010-11-06 04:34:20
  • Again, this is a 5 pages script + title page. Thank you to everybody for the reviews, and a special thank to Wayne, a 'God sent' teacher!!
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  • Sam Boseley

  • 2010-11-05 05:41:17
  • On Page 4 - Theres a small typo. you wrote rests albows on his knees, when its elbows. Delete this post when you get it.
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  • turina

  • 2010-11-05 04:49:16
  • Well, I hope you do not mind. This is the second draft, and as such is the best shot I have at this -since I have not the time to work on the project for now.