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I really enjoyed this and thought it was a great idea. It made me think of the relationship between Peter Seller's Inspector Clouseau and Kato ;)
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Hi, thanks for letting me read your short.
I really liked the idea behind this - I'm not certain that I understood it entirely but that's actually ...
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A nice attemp at some complicated work, a lot to do in just 5 short pages. Possibly after this competition is over, you could maybe flesh this out int ...
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Here are some comments as I read your script. Please take them as they are intended to help not hinder.
Page 1,
'...lights a fire in the firep ...
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Again what a great concept! I love the idea of the extraordinary bond these two men share and how it is demonstrated in the story.
It is also very ...
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Its good to see that you have taken out a lot of the descriptive narratives that were pretty much redundant. That said, Its good to see that you have ...
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When I read the first draft, I liked it already. Now I believe it read nicely, and it is better framed. This is a clever script.
Regardless of that ...
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This read smoothly now. The way this wacky situation
works resembles somehow 'The Odd couple'. You should develop it and consider a picture, or a s ...
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I like this piece. Its concept is very interesting and I can not figure out how some people do not sympathize for these men, and the situation they li ...
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