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THE BUTLER (Second Draft)

by turina

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Slightly confusing to me
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A nice attemp at some complicated work, a lot to do in just 5 short pages. Possibly after this competition is over, you could maybe flesh this out into a neat short story, It may be me but I would have liked a bit more background on them. I liked the premise and you have something promising here well done.

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