I have only just started reading on-line stories, in order to improve my own. To be honest some of them are dire- even those that seem to win competitions- but this one I really enjoyed reading.
As a reader you feel sympathy for the main character, and the dialogue is engaging and real.
The setting of Highgate cemetery adds another dimension and there are some good descriptive touches.
One or two cliches, though this would be my only criticism. I liked the ending.
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